Nov 26, 2001 12:48
22 yrs ago
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Polish term

Proposed translations

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In idiomatic English it is better to say:

The work on reshaping the principles governing the national economy is in progress.

1) There is no need to mention neither "operation" nor "functioning," like in Polish expression. These ideas are implied in the above anyway. This is a way around a literal translation: "operational principles of the national economy", which at best sounds like a "dead wood" and actually is less accurate. Other attempts of literal translation on this page were not less awkward.

2) Relegating "is in progress" to the end is equivalent to Polish "Trwają prace" at the beginning of the sentence, both positions of stress in the respective languages.

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Czesc pracy
Peer comment(s):

agree Hanna Burdon : I would get rid of "governing the" in favour of "of"... Snip, snip! ;-)
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That's true! Admit even better. (For everybody to see how difficult it is to get rid of dead wood, once it's there!))
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principles of the national economy functioning

gospodarka narodowa = national economy
zasady = principles
Peer comment(s):

agree PRoTechEE
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principles of national / domestic economy

ano, tyle...
Peer comment(s):

agree PRoTechEE : Elegancko się Pan StanisŁaw tego podchwytliwego funkcjonowania pozbył. Dobra robota.
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agree Hanna Burdon : Nice and simple.
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14 mins

principles of operation of the national economy

operation is a better term here than functioning, I think
Peer comment(s):

agree Lota : I think so too.
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agree PRoTechEE : Chyba niekoniecznie. Economy functions and does not operate nor is operated. Operation fits better engineering than social or natural systems (capitalism, weather). Czasem to metne semantycznie a tu dzskusja jałowa.
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(to rewrite) the rules governing the national economy

a less formal way of saying the same thing
Peer comment(s):

agree PRoTechEE : chopping "dead wood" always a good idea (especially when compared to some linguistic equilibristics on this page). Pidzej rules!
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-1
56 mins

the principles governing functioning of a/the national economy

webster's or collin's business dictionary and online bilingual business/marketing dictionaries
Peer comment(s):

disagree PRoTechEE : Putting two present participes together, especially without "the" between them is one thing I had in mind in the opinion above. IMO, Webster's and Collin's should indeed be held accountable for opting to omit the explanations of such issues.
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